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Kiraly ([personal profile] kiraly) wrote in [personal profile] minutia_r 2021-04-01 10:54 pm (UTC)

Oooh I love this - the way you did an multi-word rhyme so it's not just "humans" rhyming with humans, but augmented humans/demented humans and so on throughout - it's a brilliant choice and works so well! And I love the "I don't mean ruba'iyat, I mean the other thing", it's so in-character for Murderbot haha. So good!

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