Date: 2022-07-11 06:26 pm (UTC)
elleth: (Writing: Other Echoes)
From: [personal profile] elleth
I don't even go here, but I love the repetition of 'breath' and the gradual progression through the poem that hints at the events taking place here, it adds a very memorable rhythm and makes the fight very vivid. Very nice choice of words as well!
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